Thursday, February 24, 2011

What I have learnt so far in the recent LA Lessons

1. I have learnt many ways of writing a good story, for how to make a character very vivid not only in looks, but also in the way he acts, moves and his character.

2. I have also learnt how to systemically plot a story, which has its own climax and conclusion.

3. I have also learnt more ways to understand why writers write things in a certain way, using literary methods, and I have learnt how to identify them.

Thoughts about the current LA lessons.

I think the current La lessons are good as the way it is, as it is not rushing to teach us different skills and I am able to catch up with the lessons.

Thoughts about the song "where is the love"

I feel that this song really describes how many of us actually live today, people now always just care about materialistic things, like money, but do not actually show genuine care. There was also a part where the songs states that the many nations always send troops out of the country to fight terrorism, but it later states that there is actually terrorism in their own country. This shows that they do not even care to solve the ongoing problems internally and want to go out of their country to fight. This also shows that they are prejudice because they choose to attack this group of people, when even in their own country there is the problem, and the problem is as important as going overseas to fight, but they still want to place the large focus on overseas operations.
I must admit that even myself would care alot about money. I think there we should care less about money, although it is important, and show some care. Besides, care like this does not always need to use money, thus I think it never actually hurts to maybe help someone in need to the best we can, or maybe if someone bumps into you, we do not necessarily need to shout at the person even though it is not your fault. Although many people may be like this now, I still believe that there is still that sense of humanity in us.

Saturday, February 12, 2011


"I want my shoes on
my feet now!" Timmy shouted


"but its just a few feet away!" Wanda, his fairy, said in a nagging tone. Timmy gave a frown and she relented and used her wand to do magic. The shoes then went on timmy's feet and he walked out of the room when his parents shouted for him to eat dinner.
When he reached to the dinner table, they gave him a large bowl of vegetable, it included spinach, carrots, tomatoes, and almost every other vegetable you could think of. Timmy then covered his mouth and his face
turned green. He then made Cosmo,his fairy, eat all the greens, who did it willingly.


"man, I hate vegetables, how good would it be if every meal is junk food. Hey! thats an idea!" He then gave the order that every meal in the town would be junk food, while wanda nagged about consequences that may arise. But he nonchalantly gave the order the second time, and poof! The second bowl of vegetables became sweets, chocolates and potato chips. Ironically, wanda became happy and crazy when she had seen all the chocolate. Cosmo then said that wanda really loves chocolate, but the sugar rush would come. But seeing Timmy and wanda enjoying the food, he also joined it. Just a few minutes later, the whole town was in a sugar rush, everyone was jumping, runing, and everyone finished their day fast.


After awhile it wared off, and everyone was tired. Soon a few days past, and everyone had grown almost 5 times heavier. Timmy had a stomach as big as a crate, and a double chin. Timmy felt sick, and kept vomiting. Soon Timmy could not take it anymore and gave an order to make everything back to the way it was. But his fairies had also become really fat, and they just did not have the energy to find their wand. Timmy then had to do something that he hated alot, he had to eat vegetables. He took a can of it out and ate it. They then found the wand.
Timmy is a lazy boy, who is irresposible, and does many things that are sometimes stupid. He also does not think about the consequences of his actions, but usually only realizes it after it has already happened, but always tries his best to fix the problem. He has two giant front teeth. He usually seems selfish, but he is actually a kind boy, as his thinking is still immature.